Feedback Sandwich

• I love my voice. It was loud and clear.
• I need to look at the audiences more.
• I talk more about each topics.
• I need to watch out for my hand gestures.

*Goal for Improvement*

Next time, I'll have to look at the audiences more and be confident.

FAMILY

•         With me, my family is the BEST. Family is where my dad, mom, my younger sister and little brother treat me nicely and care for me. My family are nice, lovely and super AWESOME !!!
•         One day, if my family gone and leave me a lone. I might die because I'm only 11 years old and I can't take care of myself. I'll miss the caring and strict of my parents and the noisy and annoying of my sister and brother. The world will be awful without them.
•         I love my family ! If you love your family, treat them as nicely as possible, because without them, you won't have love and can't feel love. Always remember, FAMILY is where you have love and it's the best place ever. If you lose it, you can't find a new one !

                                                        I LOVE MY FAMILY A LOT :X !!!